How do ideas sound like? [Forever alone]

I have been writing down my feelings and thoughts in poems and lyrics. Sometimes I even have a melody in my mind about how the song should go. Too bad I’m not at all musical person and I have absolutely no skills of playing anything. So I tried to hum the melody and asked someone to notate that and then I gave the notation to other people to play it.

Forever alone

It has come
The autumn is here
I’m alone
no one else is near
Fine with me
I need all that space
In my head to remember every face

Every year
The story is the same
I’m alone
But no one is to blame
Never met
Those people in mind
Yelling loud
But acting like a blind

From the work
I hurry to get quickly back home
There is no one waiting me
I stare at the distance to see my new best friends
But I know that they can not see me
But I know that they can not see me

I spend my life
Sitting in my cave
Lots of friends
But no one knows my name
We have fun
That no one understands
Just one day
We will rule this crazy land

I like them
But they do not know me
In my mind
They are my family
I should look
For channel to survive
I can’t swim
But i’m too proud to dive

My humming of the melody:

Intepretation from JP:

Notation:
foreveralone

Intepretation from RB:

RB v2:

RB v3:

Intepretation from JT:

Intepretation from Phydra:

One thought on “How do ideas sound like? [Forever alone]

  1. When read this story of loneliness it burns a hole in in depths of my soul. I have this drawing in my head. It´s black and white… Drawing of a man, a lonely man. The simplicity of black lines on white paper whit nothing more and nothing less shreds me in to million pieces like the daily teardrops of lonely people every day in this cruel world. In fact the drawing as well is called “Forever alone”.

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